Working Thesis: Data collection is putting internet users at various risks. Outline/ Picture of graphic organizer (Plus brainstorming questions and answers) My final format of this project will be in the form of an essay. Due Tuesday: 11:00 am
After writing my first paper of the semester, I have seen vast differences from what I would’ve written in high school. First of all, I was not allowed to write arguments that reflected my opinions and experiences at my old school. So, this is a new process for me. What was most helpful was annotating my documents and highlighting appropriately. Something that I found slightly unhelpful, was that we spent so much lot of time on global revisions, that I…
After reviewing my rough and final drafts of the class assignment, I have noticed that my revisions are more surfaced rather than global. Surface revisions are little edits that are made in order to give clarity and polish a piece of writing. Global revisions are guided towards the structure of the writing, and relate more towards the quality of the content. Something that I should’ve taken into account while editing my rough draft, was that I had the opportunity to…
