During this round of annotations, I had not made as many text to self connections. However, I had improved by using more than one color when highlighting, and I would make notes/text to text comments wherever necessary. Compared to my first annotation this year, I have improved greatly by applying active reading to my notes and planning of each essay.
Working Thesis: Data collection is putting internet users at various risks. Outline/ Picture of graphic organizer (Plus brainstorming questions and answers) My final format of this project will be in the form of an essay. Due Tuesday: 11:00 am
For the previous essay, I had focused on creating timelines and “spider webs.” On this essay, I switched up my pre-writing routine, and decided to individually answer each question that was presented on the rubric for the style that I chose. One thing that I should have originally done differently was to avoid using my experience in the notes, since I wasn’t going to use it in the essay. However, I can simply use the same concepts and beliefs, but…
