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For the previous essay, I had focused on creating timelines and “spider webs.” On this essay, I switched up my pre-writing routine, and decided to individually answer each question that was presented on the rubric for the style that I chose. One thing that I should have originally done differently was to avoid using my experience in the notes, since I wasn’t going to use it in the essay. However, I can simply use the same concepts and beliefs, but exclude the first person impression. Something that I think will benefit me, is that I can choose which topics from above to focus on more easily in my essay.